.From looking at other peoples blogs there are a few things I could change to improve my page.
Looking at people blogs now a lot more have a plain white background. I'm keeping my background white, and the layout the same. I'm going to change my heading.
I've taken down the photo that was in my heading, I think the page looks a lot neater now than what it did as I've changed the writing style too. I've tried to neaten up my blog to make it easier to look at and find things.